Prayer of the Dragon by Eliot Pattison: A review
Prayer of the Dragon by Eliot Pattison My rating: 2 of 5 stars "Omit needless words," wrote William Strunk Jr. in The Elements of Style . It is a dictum that Eliot Pattison could profit by following. He seems to suffer from diarrhea of the pen or word processor. Words pour forth in great profusion, often repetitively and to very little effect. The words do not really seem to advance the narrative or provide enlightenment. They simply occupy space on the page. One would think that Pattison is being paid by the word. Not only is he overly wordy but Pattison has certain writing tics that get under my skin. For example, the repetition of the descriptive phrase "the old Tibetan." This appears on practically every page of the book and sometimes more than once on the page. We get it. There are no young lamas, but find an alternative way of describing them, for Buddha's sake! What irritates me most about this series is that I really, REALLY want to like it. I keep pick...